BR 2-18: Goldilocks and the Three Bears

There was a little girl called Goldilocks. She wasn’t good. One day she went to forest and she found a pretty little cottage. She knocked on the door but no answer. She walked in there and she did something and at last she was fast asleep. Momentarily three bears stomped into the house and they found a girl. Then she woke up and she opened her mouth and screamed. She ran out of the house and she ran home as fast as she could go.

If I meet a bear, I can’t scream and run out! I want not to meet a bear.

(reference)
Susanna Davidson. 2007. Goldilocks and the Three Bears. Usborne Publishing Ltd.

115 words

total 8742

BR 2-17: THE ELVES AND THE SHOEMAKER

He is shoemaker so he is making shoes. It is night, he is sad because his shoes are not beautiful. Next morning, there are some beautiful shoes on the table. He is happy. The next morning, the shoemaker and his wife find some shoes on the table again. The shoemaker has a question “Who makes the beautiful shoes?” That night, the shoemaker and his wife don’t go to bed and at twelve o’clock they see some small man. They are elves. The elves quickly make some beautiful shoes. In the morning, they go out. The elves are put on not beautiful shoes and wear. So the shoemaker and his wife make two wear and shoes for the elves. The elves happy but they don’t come store again. Instead the shoemaker becomes king’s favorite shoes so he is happy.

Thanks is very important. Always we have to have thanks feelings. So we will surely become good things.

(reference)
Edinburgh Gate, Harlow. 1996. THE ELVES AND THE SHOEMAKER. Librairie du Liban Publishers.

170 words

total 8627

BR 2-16: The Gingerbread Man

A little old woman and a little old man lived on a farm. They are happy most of the time. But they don’t have children. This thing is only unhappy. So the little old woman decided to make a boy out of gingerbread. Soon she could smell hot gingerbread. She opens the oven door and looked in. Suddenly a gingerbread man jumped out and ran away. The gingerbread man ran past a lot of places and ran on down the road, singing. But he came to a river. He wanted to cross it but he couldn’t swim. Then a fox came there and a fox said “I will take you across.” The gingerbread man jumped on a fox’s tail. The fox started swimming but his tail was in the water. So, the gingerbread man climbed up the fox, and climbed up the fox’s nose. At that time, the fox ate a gingerbread man.

The fox is sharp. The gingerbread man didn’t have a luck.

(reference)
Lesley Sims. 2006. The Gingerbread Man. Usborne Publishing Ltd.

174 words

total 8457

BR 2-15: The Town Mouse and the Country Mouse

One day a town mouse goes to visit her friend in the country. The town mouse wants the country mouse to eat delicious food. Next day the two mice arrive in town. There’s food is very delicious but there is very dangerous. The country mouse goes home.

I think own country is the best. Insistence is bad things.

(reference)
Ruth Hobart. 2006. The Town Mouse and the Country Mouse. Black Cat Publishing.

72 words

total 8283

BR 2-14: The Lion and the Mouse

It’s a sunny day in the jungle. Some mice are playing and a big lion is sleeping in the sun. A mouse gets up to the lion. The lion is very angry but he allows the mouse. The next day the mouse is walking in the jungle and he hears a roar. It is the lion’s. The lion is in a trap! The mouse helps him and they become a friend.

This story is very moving. Help each other is very important.

(reference)
Ruth Hobart. 2006. The Lion and the Mouse. Black Cat Publishing.

94 words

total 8211

BR2-13: The Hare and the Tortoise

One day the hare is talking to his friends. He says “I’m a very good runner. I ‘m the fastest animal in the forest!” The hare and the tortoise have a race. It’s time for to the race and start. The hare runs ahead very quickly. The tortoise walks, slowly but slowly. The hare thinks “He is so slow! I can stop and wait for him.” So the hare sits down under a big tree and waits for the tortoise and he goes to sleep. The hare sleep but the tortoise walks. The tortoise is the winner.

I think making light of something is not good. I want to go steadily.

(reference)
Ruth Hobart. 2006. The Hare and the Tortoise. Black Cat Publishing.

123 words

total 8117

BR 2-12: A Monster on the Street part 2

Continuance
Children pulled off their jumpers and a boy just grabbed the jumpers and threw them into the middle of road. They watched with popping eyes as the piano thundered down the road. One of the piano wheels hit the pile of jumpers. The wheel jammed as one jumper was dragged round and round and the piano lumbered across the road. The piano skidded to one side and came to a stop.

A boy is very sharp. I can’t think that act. I want to be a sharp person.

(reference)
Jeremy Strong. 2001. A Monster on the street part 2. Price Smith Ltd.

103 words

total 7994

BR 2-11: A Monster on the Street part 1

New people are moving in this town. Some children went out to look, but they could not see the new people. So they didn’t interesting. They went to their secret room and sat on the floor. Pass the time they watch the new people again. They went to out side, there is in people. They had never seen before. They are moving in this town so they are new people! Front of them house some man carrying a lot of things. When they are carrying a piano, it was heading off down the road, faster and faster. The man clung to the top of the piano. Continue…

I have not moved in other place so I want to move other place.

(reference)
Jeremy Strong. 2001. A Monster on the street part 1. Price Smith Ltd.

135 words

total 7891

BR 2-10: All in a Flap

The friends were playing on the swings in the park. A friend stood on her seat and began to swing backwards. So they were reprimanded by old man. They are play secret room and they bring something special for the room. A friend brings a parrot, a real parrot in a cage. They enjoy to play with a parrot but he suddenly took off and escape the cage. They can’t catch a parrot so a boy brings to home a cage only. He sat on a chair with his head in his hands. Suddenly something banged against the window and he looked up and the parrot was trying to get back in. He opened the window. The parrot flew right into his cage.

I think escape own animals is very fear. Return home is very happy. I want not to bring a bird.

(reference)
Jeremy Strong. 2001. All in a Flap. Prince Smith Ltd.

154 words

total 7756

BR 2-09: More Macdonalds

It was breakfast time at the Macdonald’s and Dad had some news. This house is too small so he plan build extra rooms on the side of this house. And there will be enough space upstairs for a new bedroom. A few days later the builders arrived. They dug a deep trench for the foundations of the new wall and filled it with concrete etc… This night the twins were woken by strange noises. A lot of scuffling and squeaking was going on in a hamster‘s cage. They put on the light and they peered into the cage. A hamster is lying on his side so they think a hamster died. In fact a hamster didn’t die she has babies. Next day, they build a hamster extension in a room.

I want to build a new room because my room is very small but I live there with my family there are 6 people. It is too small for us so I want to get some rooms.

(reference)
Jeremy Strong. 2001. More Macdonalds. Prince Smith Ltd.

176 words

total 7602

BR 2-08: Man-Eating Snails

Billy Steel had just had a brilliant idea. He wanted to tell his friend Ravi as soon as possible. Billy slammed on his brakes outside the Gohill’s shop and he met Ravi. He tells to Ravi his idea. Ravi can’t believe his idea but they plan an idea and they act this plan. They catch a lot of animals and display. There is not good.

Billy has interesting idea but not interesting for other people. I want to interesting act for me and other people.

(reference)
Jeremy Strong. 2001. Man-Eating Snails. Prince Smith Ltd.

94 words

total 7426

BR2-07: Sleeping Beauty

The King and Queen are proud of their baby daughter, Princess Aurora, and they invite everyone to a party, including the Flower Fairies. But one of the Fairies puts a curse on Aurora, And despite the King’s precautions, on her sixteenth birthday she meets an old lady in a tower in the castle. She finds a spinning wheel and touches it. So she and castle people sleep for a hundred years One day a Prince from Spain comes to the town and the people tell him about the sleeping Princess. He wants to see the sleeping Princess so he goes to the castle and finds the Princess. He kisses her hand and she wake up. Everyone in the castle wakes up. Everyone thank him very much for waking us up.

I had watched this movie of Disney. I like this story. I want to meet a prince.

(reference)
Catherine E. White. 2008. Sleeping Beauty. Black Cat Publishing.

157 words

total 7332

BR2-06: Sam Runs Away

Sam lives with her parents but her parents quarrel every time. So she wished she could be somewhere else and she wanted to get lost in a library book’s story and forget all about her mum and dad for a while. She ran out of the flat. She ran back towards the castle, and went into the secret room and she wanted to cry. Ben knew something was wrong and came into the secret room. They talked about a lot of things. She decided to go home. Her parents were angry because she didn’t say where she was going. She told about own feelings. When her parents listened it, they reflected.

Sometimes I want to run out of my house too. I want to tell about everything.

(reference)
Jenny Alexander. 2001. Sam Runs Away. Prince Smith Ltd.

137 words

total 7175

BR2-05: Mercury and the Woodcutter

One day, a woodcutter set off to work in the woods for the day. He had a very good axe. His father had given it to him It had a beautiful wooden handle and a strong, sharp head. He found a tree near the river that he thought would be good for firewood. He put his axe on the ground near the riverbank. Suddenly, the axe started to slip and fell into the river with a splash. He was very sad. Suddenly, the river god, Mercury appeared and asked him a question. He answered honestly. So He can get 3 axes. His friend listened to this story and try to do. But he didn’t answer honestly. So H lost his axe.

I think honest is very important. So I want to life honestly.

(reference)
Carmel Reilly.
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141 words

total 7038

BR 2-04: Beyond Strange Street

Sam lay in bed with her fingers in her ears because some sounds are hearing next door. So she can't sleep well. She got out of bed and she go out the room. She stepped in the empty lift and she pushed the magic button so she would be in strange street.The doors opened and she got a shock because there was a little track winding away between tall trees.She walked on and on and she met a lot of animals. At last she stepped in the lift and come home.


The magic button is very interesting. I want to take me to a strange street. But i want not to scare place. I want to go a fun place.

(reference)
Kaya Umansky. 2001. Beyond Strange Street. Prince Smith Ltd.

133 words

total 6897

BR2-03: Puss in Boots

Daniel is a young poor man. He lives near the castle with his cat. One day he saw a princess and he was in love soon. Daniel and his cat do a lot of things to meet princess. Their plans are very good and succeeded! He can have lunch and tea with princess. He was very happy. At last, Daniel and Princess Caroline are married.

This story has a lot of dream! Daniel’s cat’s idea is very good and surprise. I can’t get like this idea. I want to spend my life with animal can speaking. And I want to married with rich man!

(refarense)
Judith Percival. 2008. Puss in Boots. Black Cat Publishing.

114 words

total 6764

BR2-02: Pinocchio

Mr. Cherry is a carpenter. He has a piece of wood but he gives his friend Mr. Gepetto it. Mr. Gepetto wants to make a puppet and he want to named it Pinocchio. He comes home and make a puppet. Make Pinocchio was finished and as soon as he was moving! One day a cricket visit Pinocchio. Pinocchio went to a lot of place and he deceived by the fox and the cat but he escape from them. He met a fairy and he was bewitched by her. One day he went home but Mr. Gepetto left home. Mr. Gepetto look for Pinocchio and he went to the sea but he was eaten a shark and the other day Pinocchio sent to shark’s mouth. They can meet again and escape from the shark’s stomach and they went home again. That night, the fairy appeared to Pinocchio in a dream and she kissed him. Pinocchio woke up and surprise! Because he become real boy! Pinocchio and Mr. Gepetto cry and joy.

I read at first, I didn’t like Pinocchio because he was not good boy. But at last, he became brave boy. I was very happy because he can become a real boy.

(referense)
Carlo Collodi. 2004. Pinocchio. Usborne Publishing Ltd.

210 words

total 6650

BR2-01: Gulliver's Travels

Lemuel Gulliver loved to travel and he loved adventures.
He boarded a ship for the Far East. The voyage was a difficult and dangerous one. Some tried to escape in a small boat but it capsized and they all drowned except for Gulliver. He stumbled ashore and collapsed on the beach and he was asleep. When he woke up, he couldn't move because he was tied to the ground. He was just as amazed because there’s people are very small. It was like a toy town. He has to spend for sometime in there because the emperor said “Let’s keep him.” But he wants to free so he pleaded to the emperor “Please set me free.” He was free but few days. One day he leave the country and he was picked up by the ship. The captain asked him “where have you come from?” Gulliver answered and he show small animals to the captain. So the captain was astonished. The captain agreed to take Gulliver all the way home.

Its story is very interesting. I have read before in Japanese. This story is impossible but if exist the country, I want to see it but I want not to go there because I want to free!

(referense)
Jonathan Swift. 2002, 1980. Gulliver's Travels. London: Usborne Publishing Ltd.

218 words

total 6440

My Favorite comic

I often read comic books. I love comic books. When I was junior high school student, I used my pocket money for comic books and I have more than one-hundred comic books. Of course I read girl’s comic books but I read boy’s comic books too. My favorite girl’s comic book is “Kiminitodoke” It is very interesting, sad, cute and beat my heart! I want to love someone as convenience as it. My favorite boy’s comic book is “ONE PIECE”. Do you know it? It is so interesting!! I watch its animated cartoon. It is interesting too. It has gag element and emotion element. Sometimes I cry because I was impressed by the story. I want every people to read this book. If who didn’t read before, it is big loss.

131 words

total 6222

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